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A Sunday Six Pirate

August 21, 2011

For today’s Sunday Six – a snippet from the Pirate Scene in our free read, Cherry Tune-Up, at


“And what about you, lass—” Jack’s gaze probed Bobbi Jo’s soul— “are you prepared to pay for your voyage?”

“Yes,” she managed to mumble.

“Is it true that no man has ever claimed you?”


“And you’re willing to divest yourself of your treasure for me? For your passage?”

“It is but a small price to pay,” she said meekly.


You can find the Pirate Scene in Chapter SEVEN or a link to all the chapters HERE – enjoy!

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24 Comments leave one →
  1. August 21, 2011 5:05 am

    Oh this will make Jack’s day I’m suspecting. Fingers crossed he appreciates her treasure. Great six! Thank you.

    • adrianakraft permalink
      August 21, 2011 7:39 am

      Even more, it’s gonna make Bobbi Jo’s day – she’s been waiting a long time!

  2. August 21, 2011 7:44 am

    OOOH! ‘her treasure’ A very good six! you have me hooked.

  3. adrianakraft permalink
    August 21, 2011 8:20 am

    Thanks, Kerrianne – it just dawned on me, in any other context, “her treasure” might qualify for purple prose! Hopefully, pirates can get away with talking like that…

  4. Heather Thurmeier permalink
    August 21, 2011 9:03 am

    Oh some pirate fun! Sounds like a good story!

  5. August 21, 2011 9:31 am

    Arrrr! Love pirate stories!

  6. August 21, 2011 10:44 am

    I bet the divesting turns out to be really fun!

  7. August 21, 2011 11:09 am

    Eek! Don’t do it!

  8. adrianakraft permalink
    August 21, 2011 12:01 pm

    Thanks, all – definitely some pirate fun! I can’t decide whether I’d rather imagine Jack as Johnny Depp or Orlando Bloom. Maybe I should just go for both!

    And Dee, not to worry – Jack’s role playing a pirate for reasons of his own, and he’s offering exactly what Bobbi Jo’s been waiting for, I promise she’ll be safe. Eventually!

  9. August 21, 2011 12:10 pm

    Such a sacrifice. Hope the “voyage” is worth the price.

  10. August 21, 2011 12:13 pm

    Oooo Very interesting six! Will have to go and check out the free read…


  11. August 21, 2011 12:21 pm

    Very nice. Love it.

  12. August 21, 2011 12:33 pm

    Love the description.

  13. August 21, 2011 1:18 pm

    Damn- I love these books- very much erotic and love how they unfold- great 6

  14. August 21, 2011 2:05 pm

    Hidden treasures are meant to be plundered. Very nice!!

  15. August 21, 2011 6:47 pm

    I wonder if that price will really be that small. Great six!

  16. August 21, 2011 7:21 pm

    You have me wondering why she wants to give up her treasure. Is it for him or something she needs from him to survive.

    • adrianakraft permalink
      August 21, 2011 9:00 pm

      I love that I’ve got you wondering – and it’s a hard question, which of them needs it more…

  17. August 21, 2011 8:01 pm

    Wow! What a sacrifice… nice six.

  18. August 22, 2011 5:21 am

    Hmmmm…Wonder why she’s willing to pay such a high price for passage? What is she running from? Great Six!

  19. August 22, 2011 8:49 am

    Obviously she’s desperate for a ride! lol!

  20. August 22, 2011 10:43 am

    hmmm sign me up for that trip!
    nicely done

  21. August 22, 2011 2:24 pm

    With lines like that, I don’t think it’s her ‘soul’ that he’s probing with his eyes…

  22. August 23, 2011 11:24 am

    Hope he’s gentle with her! Great six!

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